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Remake 11 - MxP: Oneshot by paratroopaCx Remake 11 - MxP: Oneshot by paratroopaCx
Original... Drawn on June 12, 2011 - Remade on July 17 2013 :)

Once again: If you don't like cornyness, this is not the comic for you. Viewer discretion is advised. -w-

Two years ago I came across a wonderful story written by :star: koopakrazy85.deviantart.com/ar... :star: :iconkoopakrazy85:~KoopaKrazy85 I loved it SO much I wanted to draw it. And looking back on HOW I drew it 2 years ago, I feel so dissapointed with... everything ^^"
So, here is the long awaited, new and improved, and much cornier remake :giggle:

24 panels, 2 entire days... why can't my SMG pages look as nice as this one?

As always this was made completely on Gimp 2, it's amazing what you can do with just fooling around with the brushes and tools :lol:

I can't tell you how proud I am of this, so, I hope you enjoy :aww:

Story and dialogue (C) ~KoopaKrazy85
Illustration (C) *paratroopaCx
Peach and Mario (C) Nintendo
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:iconagentridley:
AgentRidley Featured By Owner Edited Mar 4, 2015
This comic really made my day Meow :3 :) (Smile) 
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Ganerdude221 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015
Damn, that Mario's good.
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PrincessHeavenly15 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww! It's so romantic I love it!
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gameguySX75 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i like the alternative version better. mostly refering to Mario's reaction to the kiss on the cheek in the alternative version. the spinning hat idea fits him way more. it was better than this version. you did great on both versions though! =) i just like the old one better. =P
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MateoRa Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
This music goes great with this comic

youtu.be/b5FoKcTyKzI
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:iconsupermariofan44:
SuperMariofan44 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
Is the first time I see Mario without his gloves 
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AskBenDrownedOrRake Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
dat flowers
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shadowdelta47 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
SO MUCH LOVABLE FLUFF
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DemonKnightRoni Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute
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SilverScarlet99 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I like this because there is so much luigi and daisy stuff that I always feel there needs to be more Mario and peach stuff so well done. 
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mariosonicfan16 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
Such a cute story!
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TempistWielder Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Why is it called remake 11?:| (Blank Stare) 
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TempistWielder Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
never mind.
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onica-helman Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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KoopaKrazy85 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh lord almighty, forgive me! This is the single most overdue thing in my inbox both for time and importance! Shame and dishonour to me! My lack of response until now is nothing short of a crime punishable by being boiled alive or dismemberment or hanging or burning at the stake, at the very least I deserve a really severe lecture or something! I'll have you know that any lack of response on DA completely misrepresents my real-world reaction to seeing this. Do you know how many people I have shown this to?! Like wow man you make me feel famous! And everyone thinks it's awesome!

BLARGHAMAZEBALLS. SUCH WONDER. I'mma try and be as full as I can in this comment, and I have both images open to compare :D

-- actual comment time now --

Motherfucking SHIT, Krystal!! :wow: You went and did it AGAIN?! The first one was already great, but damn! You've just taken it to a totally new level in rebooting it!! This is a fucking five-layer cake of awesome with adorable, mushy icing all over! Words cannot describe how much I freaked out, and even now I still freak out when I see it! MxP is so wonderful, thankyou for making so much of it :D

The first thing that really struck me with this comic is the background/framing - you've added much more detail and allowed some of the shots to be further out so as to show the scenery as well as characters - that's awesome! You've got not only a more full and detailed background but one that stays quite consistent throughout the entire comic. Gives you a good feel of the place in three dimensions, y'know? I guess working on a comic up to this point would've helped with that - if you hadn't thought about it then perhaps something to keep in mind? I really like how this looks to be set in one place as a story rather than a set of moments, it's so well connected and most of that is in the background!

The colours used also set the mood really well - and what a mood that is ;) very soft and gentle, and hey, it's romantic! That is the most comfortable green I could ever imagine a grass being. I want to sit on this grass, reminds me of how the MK looks in Galaxy, actually :D Also I appluad your patience with drawing flowers, like really I take my hat off to you there! Fuckin' look at panel 14! How'd you bother with that?! FLOWERS.

THE SKY. WOW. FUCKIN' WOT. That's epic, like seriously I love how INTENSE it is! Kicks the shit out of those older stars! Sparkly glittery goodness, and it's just so full. I guess the Mushroom Kingdom would probably have that many stars at night, come to think of it - seriously, there's way less glow from cities and stuff than on modern Earth. Wouldn't it be awesome to see something like that of a nighttime? *sigh* ah well, anyways...

And of course Mario and Peach look splendid here. One thing I particularly like is how much they're very directly interacting with one another and their faces express that best of all. For something so heavily set around the characters' relationship, I think that's really important to emphasise and it's damn well illustrated here. Peach's faces in 10 and 15, as well as Mario's in 19 are so beautifully expressive yet actually quite subtle, so congrats there!

Sorry if I sound like I'm bashing the old one or anything - may seem that way but I'm not. I love them both. This one's just a lot better because damn, girl, you improved!!! Way to art! I know that when you get a comment on a semi-old pic, some people tend to be like "bleh, my old art, ew" but I'm hoping to God that's not how you feel about this thing, because it'll always be damn awesome :aww:

I still think that signature is genius :lol:
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paratroopaCx Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
DAMN this comment alone must have taken you hours to write! It's almost the same size as the actual comic! :D
You need not apologise for the lateness, your real-world reaction means so much more ^^ truly the best part of creating drawings for someone: their reaction! priceless :lol:
i'm SO happy you like it so much, i'm not even sure how to reply to such a massive comment bomb! =P
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KoopaKrazy85 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol, I don't even know how much time I spent, I was just focusing on that fucking comic. That's all I needed :P

ha, it is really nice to be able to make someone smile, I agree with you :D

haha, don't worry about it, just enjoy the happies ^^
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mrm64 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
....Whelp. I think I done melted now :love:
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ajacollielover Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Professional Artist
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute!!!
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SuperMariofan44 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
This is so freakin cuteLove  (like Yoshi lol) Nice job PTCX Clap
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Fluttershy9999 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
THIS IS SO PERFECT! C: i love it! aaaaw
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SongMina Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Um hi!

I just noticed your icon <3
Its super cute! :3
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Fluttershy9999 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thankyou! I love Elsa <3
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SongMina Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
Your welcome! ^_^ its true, she is wonderful!
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CyberBowser Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'm actually tearing up right now. (sniff) This is so beautiful. Really tugs at the heartstrings, doesn't it?
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snowwolf12132 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yep :')
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henechi Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
:iconmbisonyesplz: Que liiindo :3
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rmw10924 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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TheKillerShaymim Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
:iconmbisonyesplz: YES! YEEEES!
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PeachyKirbyLover77 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*squeals and gets all fluttery in belly. falls on floor saying repeatedly "TOO CUTE!!!"
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smashland22 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
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MaggieArtist Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Really Cute! I donīt have words... Your art so beautiful la in love Rain of love for Mario and Peach XD
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Atom-Smasher-Errors Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
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Iolipop Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Omg im gonna cry! ♥♥
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MarioLuigi25 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
Your MxP art always helps remind me of why I got into this pairing in the first place.
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mikiloolu Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
adorable

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xxSuperMarioGalaxyxx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so awesome! :D I love this thing so much!
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12luigi Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no sure if i already commented on this but     CUTEEEE!!!!
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NeoduelGX Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student General Artist
since you draw Princess Peach, this challenge is for you: neoduelgx.deviantart.com/journ…
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MarioStrikerMurphy Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Emotive!
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Marioman94 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
GREAT JOB!!!!ManMagnetEmote ManMagnetEmote ManMagnetEmote ManMagnetEmote ManMagnetEmote Emote Spin Emote Spin 
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Kenyeliis Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
OMG INSTANTS FAV"!!!!! so cutah!!
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Sweet-Syrup Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CUTE OHMY GOSH <3<3
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Luigisfanforever Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Omg so cute <3
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thirteenthfearless Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
SO DARN KEWT!!!!!!! :iconsocuteplz:
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LeaPeach Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
How very cute!! ^-^
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MarioXMariana Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
i cant stop reading this comic :iconomgsocuteplz:
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Cherryberrybonbon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, so cute!! <333 And, amazing improvement! ^^
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